i miss you...
jo mere ashq se bheegi hui chhitthi pukaare to,
just wrote some days back......i know you wont like it much
but this is all i had to express.....
jalaa kar khaaq kar dena, magar inkaar mat karnaa.
mere aansu meri chaahat kaa haal-e-dil sunaate hain,
o sang-dil,bhoolkar bhi tum koi guftaar mat karnaa.
jo toota hai mera jazbaa,jo bikhraa hoon main andar se,
hun zakhmi,bas koi tum aur mujhpar vaar mat karnaa.
salaah is ishq mein haare hue insaan ki sun lo,
guzaarish hai yahi meri,KISI SE PYAAR MAT KARNAA
too good sir...seems you have lost in your love...your poetry reflects your feelings in a very expressible manner...keep going....
ReplyDeleteaapke baare mein aur jaanna chaahungi...agar izaazat ho to...your fan...vandana
AAP LIKHTE BHI HAIN PATAA NAHI THAA.TOO GOOD.WAISE KOUN HAI WO KHUSHNASEEB JINPE AAP KURBAAN HUE JAA RAHE HAIN.....??
ReplyDeletetoo good...keep posting...
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ReplyDeleteyou stopped replying to your fans or what?it has been a long time since we last chat.
ReplyDeletemay be you are busy.
you have got beauty in your words..you are not only handsome but a intellect as well....keep it up
ReplyDeleteज़िंदगी में कभी किसी से प्यार मत करना
ReplyDeleteअगर ग़लती से हो जाए तो इज़हार मत करना
निभा सको तो ही चलना इन राहों पर
वरना किसी की ज़िंदगी यूँ ही बर्बाद मत करना
good job sakht jaani..aka piyush...the multi-talented.
ReplyDeletekeep it up.keep posting
saale. khud hi apne bare me likhte hue sharam nhi aati..saale ghalib ki aulad..
ReplyDeleteKya khoob hai bhai!!
ReplyDeleteaate hi commentbaaji shuru kar dai aapne??
you are most welcome Tanvi!!